Homework of August 4th

Thesis： China and Korea have both similarities and differences in family structure, dinning etiquette and gift-giving.

Parts of thesis:
1.Topic: China and Korea
2.Pattern of Organization: Compare and contrast
3.Subtopics: family structure, dinning etiquette, gift-giving

Topic sentences:
1.Firstly, Chinese family structure and Korean family structure are quite the same.
2.Secondly, Korean dinning etiquette doesn't differ much with the Chinese one which is a little more gentle.
3.Last but not the least, there are also some differences about gift-giving, but this time, Chinese has the more complex one.

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  1. Language Trainer2017年8月4日 09:42

    Good work but only include the required 4 elements of a topic sentence: "which is a little more gentle" is not necessary.

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